Category: Writing

How to’s on writing books, articles, essays, pretty much anything. If I’ve done it, you can too.

  • How a Four Minute Song From Les Miserables Can Help You Write a Great Plot

    Image courtesy of soulfire82 at sxc.hu  - Notre Dame, site of another Victor Hugo story. No, not 'Rudy'
    Image courtesy of soulfire82 at sxc.hu
    – Notre Dame, site of another Victor Hugo story. No, not ‘Rudy’.

    There is a part of storytelling that all the greats know. Get this right, and you will overwhelm your audience with emotion. Tears will be shed.

    People will love your characters more than their own family.

    Okay, I embellished a bit. Still, the lesson is important to any great novel, movie, or series.

    And I learned it from a musical.

    One Day More

    Last year I saw Les Miserables

    Well, I saw it in England back in 2009, but this time it was the movie version.

    Two-thirds of the way in, there’s a song called ‘One Day More’.  In just four minutes, I learned a lesson about storytelling that’s easily worth a million dollars.

    In most stories, plot climax happens around 75-80% through the story.

    The ring of power is destroyed.

    The Nazis reap the consequences of tampering with the Ark of the Covenant.

    Michael Corleone takes out his enemies while attending a baptism.

    In most of these situations, the main character fully realizes the outcome of pursuing his goal, and the conflict in his story diminishes after it is over.

    That’s a good story.

    But what about a great story?

    All Story Arcs Meet at the Top

    A great story weaves the plots of all the characters – all their hopes, dreams, fears, and ambitions – and guides them towards one eruption point.

    In this short segment of Les Mis, here is what happens:

    Jean Valjean is trying to leave France before it erupts in civil war, all the while fearing that he will never escape his past.

    Marius makes a lifelong commitment to a girl who is leaving the country, while deciding to join an under-equipped, and under-prepared side of the rebellion.

    Cossette realizes she loves someone other than her father, then is pulled away from it before she could ever enjoy the relationship.

    Eponine realizes she will never be with the man she loves, and she truly has nothing left to lose by joining the rebels.

    Enolras leads a group of young men all willing to die for freedom from tyranny – and the fight starts tomorrow!

    Javer has put all his faith in an institution he thought couldn’t be beaten. Now that it may crumble, he sees his very source of security and identity under attack. He will spy against the rebels in what is probably the least convincing covert op in history.

    Mr. and Mrs. Thernadiere risk their lives more than ever to profit from the chaos around them

    Society: The upper class abandoned responsibility and replaced it with selfishness. They like the status quo. The lower class, on the other hand, will do whatever it takes to make things right.

    See my point? All the story arcs meet at the top near the same moment. In my opinion, this is why Les Miserables affects people so deeply.

    If you want to one day create a story just as powerful, do not ignore this lesson.

    Every character must feel like the story is about them, and each character must face their demons at the same moment.

    One day more builds suspense about all these characters and the world they live in –in about four minutes. If a good plot was like opium, then ‘One day more’ in Les Mis is storytelling heroin.

    For a dose of what I’m talking about, check out this song here. Nobody knows the day or hour of judgement day, but for the characters in your story – you should!

    REVERSAL: With any rule, there is always an exception. This may be too elaborate for any story that could be read/seen in just 30 minutes. Also, this technique could become predictable if you overuse it. Nonetheless, you should be able to create an epic masterpiece if your story calls for it, and this plot technique will serve you well.

    Have you ever seen a story that followed this rule really well? Let me know in the comments below.

  • Getting Out of Your Own Way.

    There are many people out there doing amazing things.

    Writing can do wonders for your intelligence, especially with other people.

    Imagine it: When you create a story, populated with different people. you have to create those people. People who aren’t you. In acting upon your need, desire, and best efforts to create those people, you learn that your own subconscious mind is a tricky beast. You’ll find a way to sneak your own personal preferences, dislikes, ambitions, or their opposites, straight into your characters. Depending on the direction the story needs to go, a lot of it needs to be edited out.

    But by whom, you? That’s like asking the man with dark sunglasses on to turn on the light. They may notice the change, but they still see the world through those super-c0ol, or not-so-cool, lenses.

    As it turns out, writing about other people is a skill. By practicing it, you learn so much about your own patterns, and begin to notice the patterns in others as well. This is one of the biggest reasons why I don’t get when people say that ‘fiction writing’ has no value.

    If the act of writing a story gives you a better ability to look at the world from beyond your own personal biases, then it’s practically a crash-course in truth-seeking, wisdom, and emotional intelligence. The investment is well worth it.

    Given, I’m no expert yet. I hope I can be good one day. So far for me, the only way to really improve is to interact with other people as much as possible, continue to edit out the parts of me that sneak into the characters’ lives, and keep writing stories.

    Maybe somewhere between my 4th and 40th story, I’ll reach that self-determined stage where I can look in the mirror and call myself ‘good’ at this skill.

    Have you had trouble looking outside of your own viewpoint?

    Has a lack of skill in this area negatively impacted your ability to succeed the way you really want to?